Other than the typos, a very engrossing story. Well written and definitely could be developed int an "Adventures of" series of Shorts, or a Full Novellete/Novel.

Steve

Good job so far, Lowell. The paragraphing is kind of strange, but I guess there's not much you can do about that. Great story. I'll read some more later. Keep up the awesome work! Starshield is cool. I was disappointed to find that not many people read and review these, but keep writing. Interesting plot and characters so far, I look forward to reading more.

-Dathomiran