A very well put together piece. Those last lines are oh-so true, and I don't think most of us realize just how true they can be.

Its been too long since I actually laughed out loud at a fanfic but I was laughing several times in the previous chapters. The chapter "War" was really good. Right now I'm taking a class on the US and Vietnam War and we're specifically studying the consequences that the G.I.'s are facing. You did a spot on job with it.

Oh yes! This! This is Mirage perfection here. The indignity of it all, and of course Jazz wouldn't rat Bee out. *hugs all of them*

Very deep. I loved it. I can't wait for more. D

Once again, total win on Thrust's part. XD Poor Red Alert...

And this is why I was near-terminally elated when you posted to the Pit again. Funny as hell and then deep as the Mariannas Trench: probably, you are the best writer on this site.

This is just as funny as most of P.G. Woodhouse. I wonder whose alt-mode is Bertie Wooster?

Bad enough that Sides earns it so often! Poor Ratchet, gone molasses (all black and sticky), and he's done it at the Wrong Bot.

*tries to sound bad for Prowl but manages to laugh through words* Not only is his ego damaged, but he now has the twins harassing him about the accident. He's not going to live this one down, huh? XD

Gotta tell ya, this was... jarring. Reading the first three chapters and laughing, and then hitting this like a brick wall.

It was... really, really good, though. Still awesome, just... Fuck, I'm crying.

When I saw the notice in my inbox that The Starhorse was back, I probably woke the neighbors! Woo-hoo! I sent the link to the story to a friend, and only then did I allow myself to dig into the deliciousness I expected. And I wasn't disappointed! Mirage is wonderfully snarky, Bumblebee excruciatingly hapless, and Jazz is ... Jazz. On we go!

Lmao! That was a total win on Mirage's part. XD

I have a rather awkward expression on my face right now. Something like a cross between amusement and extreme incredulity.

Poor, poor Red Alert.

Didn't laugh quite as hard as the first one, but now I'm sporting a rather large grin.

Oh lawd... I cannot stop laughing. XD I can just picture the expression on BB's face if he were in bipedal mode. The utter, scared-slagless terror...