This really is a wonderful story and I do pray that you return to it someday.

Good story and such a shame to not have finished it. Thanks for sharing!

great story! please continue!

SS

Not updated for... four years? Mate, that's just tragic! -cries-

I love this, and I NEED you to write more! Please, with all the love in the world, get off your lazy arse and update this! And I stress., with all the love in the world! :P

hey

this is really good. please keep it going

Oh hi. Well, let me tell you that this is an amazing story. It would be a shame if you didn't finish it. I don't read crossovers EVER! And was tempted to close this fic as soon as I saw it was one, but instead just went for it. Faith? LOL. Seriously, it's already a great story and you haven't really gotten into it yet (I mean in regards of what will happen with Voldemor, and she hasn't met Harry yet, etc.) and it's hard to keep the readers interested with only the background of the characters. I see you're thinking of starting it up again, and I for one would be greatly interested in reading the rest of it!

This story is very good.

Are you gonna update it any more?

Very cool, its a shame your abandoning it

NO! please dont abandone this most exelent fic, you need to update soon. (If you don't may I?)

is there a completion of the story anywhere or are you going to finish? plz its very good!

Good writning, I hope you will finish it eventually

Ok... Plot wise, it is pretty good, it has some unique twists that i haven't seen before. While your grammar isn't bad, it is very unusual and i would highly recommend getting a native English speaking beta to make it more fluid to read.

For example, it says "Being each day by his side..." it is 'technically' correct, but people don't actually speak like that. It would be more like "working each day by his side..." or "Spending day after day by his side..."

Also there is this part... "But they were part of the US army and any relationship beyond friendship was firmly prohibited." they were part of the US Air Force, not the army. They also say "Unscheduled off-world activation" not "Incoming travelers"...

Anyway, im not trying to be an a** and like i said before you have a good plot and ideas, just need a beta that knows what they are doing to catch some of this stuff.

I have just finish your story today and I found I quite enjoy it. Why had you quit writing?

This was just plain AWSOME so far. I like how you tie everything together. I thought the part about losing a baby was very well thought out. GOOD JOB and WRITE MORE SOON!

ive just found this story and i love it! please add more soon! i cant wait to see what happens, please find a way to bring sirius back!

sam

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