this is a nice, beautifully written suicidal angsty fic :) I love how you make her to be so obsessed with perfection. perfection is indeed a topic for madness. I wish you can write more stuff like this for lomille XD

You have no idea how rare it is to find a really great non-slash story here.

Definitely one of the fanfiction gems written about Logan and Camille, in fact even one of the best angst fanfic under BTR, in general.

I hope you write some more about this pair because your writing is stunning.

Oh my God. You're good. You're better than good that was fucking beautiful! Are you kidding me? That was so realistically amazing I can't believe it's over. And not even a happy ending! It was too good.

Great job!

Amazing and so angsty. It was absolutely amazing. Well done and I can't wait to read more.

I love it!:) I can't wait to read more Lomille FICs from u:)

Oh my goodness - I absolutely LOVED this. I've been looking for a Camille-centric story pretty much exactly like this. Insecurities, self-harm, an eating disorder, etc. (And Logan, of course - because I lovelovelove them together.) I'm not even sure why, I guess it's because her character has the potential for so much *more*. And the constant rejection must somehow affect her.

I love your writing style as well. I feel it definitely added a different, realistic sense to the story, as if we were in Camille's head, filled with her thoughts and raw emotions. And both the beginning and ending (with Logan) were just so perfect, in an incredibly sad, tragic way.

So, obviously I can't wait to read more of your Logan/Camille stories. :)