:,( so sad. No way to continue. Just :,(

BAWWWWW! :'(

*favorites*

Those seem unrelated. Huh.

I think, you should TOTALLY write more angsty stories. This one was really good. I mean it. Q,Q

Poor Wheatley. Realized a bit too late didn't he?

You should probably do more "Chell actually DIED!" fics with Wheatley. Cause you can die at various times in Portal 2. Amazing right?

But just angsty stories in general is good too C:

This was depressing, but so wonderfully written. I actually teared up a bit toward the end.

There aren't a lot of evil Wheatley stories on here, just a bunch of romance fics, so reading this was refreshing.

Wonderful work ;)

Oh wow that was really sad. It was just...oh gosh brilliantly depressing. So very well done

THIS. Is amazing! I love the way you wrote this! It brought tears to my eyes, especially the ending. I love how you portray power-mad Wheatley, especially in response to actually losing Chell, permanently. This is so perfect, and so well done! D Awesome, awesome job!

i like this. i was just expecting her to portal out, as you do in the game. but she didn't! wow. i like this because it's different. not expected! it's also short, sweet, and angsty. exactly how you meant it to be, i suppose, reading your note.

i don't assume you're doing more chapters... no real way to continue from that, really (unless you think of something really, really creative!). awesome job, though! well-written. speaking of well-written, i love the way you wrote human!wheatley in GLaDOS's body. i don't see enough of that here (wheatley in GLaDOS's body, that is)... maybe i'm just not looking in the right places.