aww! alex is totally hed ovr heels 4 Brittney! (no, duh!) its adorable.
(u kno wen u put a period da end of a sentence, it is fact.)

aww! tht's so sweet of alex! *fangrls*

omg! wut's Brittney's dad gonna do? :( *anxious* wut's Alex's mum gonna say? :(
oh, gawd! y can't i just read dis story faster?

*evil smirk/grin spreads accross my face* hehehe...

*whines sarcastically* (b warned: i have dry humor) WhaaaaaT? MORE Spanish? Aw, cum awn! *pouts like a 3-yr.-old/ smiles*
*gets pissed* gawdammit, Brittney! i dont lk it wen awsum, pretty grls lk u act all insecure & shit! :( *pissed/annoyed/gives a pointy glare to Brittney* ahem! *clears throat/coughs* HINT TO -DA MOTHERFUKIN- HINT! *cough, cough*
nice job, nonetheless, julie :)

julie, dis was awsum! bt, wen u r writing in Spanish, could u please put an English translation in parenthesis next to it, like how u did wen u where writing the last "Alex" and "Brittney" POVs'? B-cuz i dont speak Spanish. (tho im pretty sure im going to have to next skewl yr. wen im forced to do tht) & tht wld b helpful..
Anyways, I really like the format on how you did this story and i think its awsum already! i already put this story on my favorites (not on , b-cuz im 2 l-z 2 make a profile, bt da 1 on my laptop)! :)

Soooo good please write more!

MOREEE!

i am loving this story...I'm a HUGE perfect chemistry fan!(as you can tell by my name-Brittaney Ellis)

Very good! Continue

Great chapter and please update soon thanks.

Are you going to continue?! I wanna see what happens!

I love this story you should totally keep writing!

keep writing! i love it! :)))

Hello! I think this story is AWESOME! Update SOON! please :)

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