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Shinigami Kiyomi 5/20/12 . chapter 1
seems fun
kayura sanada 5/17/10 . chapter 1
Okay, I remembered something I've always wanted to say! Yay!

Okay, so I absolutely love how you make these guys HUMAN without sacrificing their original personalities. You have them so... I dunno, emotionally repressed, I guess, at the beginning of the Arc, but the five really come out of their shells around each other, and this piece reminded me of that. To think of Heero and Wufei diving for doughnuts... but that's what teenagers do, and I'm glad to see them portrayed as teenagers, something people don't even think of when considering these guys. So thank you!

-Kayura
TheOneThatIsAddictedToHPfics 11/23/08 . chapter 1
loved it!
Fallen-Yuki 5/13/07 . chapter 1
Lmfao. That was good. Really cute. ]
futagoakuma-tenshi01 10/17/04 . chapter 1
No! Save the Crispy Creams!
Emily Hato 12/1/02 . chapter 1
THey took his doughnuts ... I'm not sure but where I'm from Krispy Kreme are the new thing we get there hats and balloons and they pass out samples in line ... they just made a branch here from Detroit MI and they are the best so whether or not that's what you are talking about . . . YUM! :)
Reiji Neko Mitsukai 10/14/02 . chapter 1
Now before I go and say "You should write another one", I'm going to actually look for more. Still cute fluff, although this one was more funny. I know someone would would really enjoy this fic.
AngeloflightPd 5/9/02 . chapter 1
I like your flic I thought it was cute and funny
Ponderosa 4/13/02 . chapter 1
I swear I sat next to "Big Dave" the last time I was up at 3com for a giants game O_o

Anyhow, nice addition to your arc. _ The ending was really cute and I liked the "Hey! No clown comments" in particularl rofl.
Destiny Star 4/12/02 . chapter 1
LOL! Heheehehh... Duo is a girl magnet, but who doubts it? HE's so cute! (Not as cute as Quatre but still...) There is one thing though...

It's Krispy, not crispy. No offence but I like 'em a LOT!
kracken 4/12/02 . chapter 1
I loved this story! It was very funny and very well done.

you are such a good writer! _
Azusa-J 4/11/02 . chapter 1
Good fic! I luv it. So what's next?
Horuri 4/11/02 . chapter 1
This is sooooo funny! It reminds me of me and my friends at sports stuff. Well not the military showing up, but you know. Hehe, poor Duo. He can't help being sexy.
silvershinigami 4/10/02 . chapter 1
Oooh, I *love* Krispy Kreme...and they give you a free sample straight out of the oil when you go up to the counter...mmm...Oh, now I'm hungry. _ I can just see those horny old women- and I love Big Dave! He sounds like a Maguanac. _ Ja!
Skippys Cat 4/10/02 . chapter 1
ROFLMAO!

Leave it to Duo to not only do everything in his power to get noticed and not mean too. But also get picked fan of the day. Make not only major but helpful friends. Get womanhandled, free sweets and a load of sexy clothes just so he can go out and do it all over again!

I can't wait to see what Quatre checks off his list next! happy sigh I just love your stories.
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