|Reviews for The Mamas and The Papas|
| Plaid 1/13/13 . chapter 3
"Never mind that. Look at this dustpan! A broken dustpan for a trash heap! We can use it to not clean up around here! Is that conceptual or what?" - Gunge
"All right, Fritz, what's your platform?"
Looking around, Fritz replied, "I don't stand on platforms. They usually break under me."
It's lines like these that make me love your writing! Mokey and Red's dialogue was nice, too-a real adult version of what their discussions usually sound like.
Poor Wembley :( Your explorations of family are really interesting and anecdotal, true Fraggle Rock-style!