I have snorted at least twice with every chapter! Awesomesauce!

hahahahahhaahhah scarlet! lol cute and yes scarlet has had snakes balls in a jar for years now lol hahahahahahahahahahahaha hurry update!

I said it before and I'll say it again: Storm's version of golf is a HUGE improvement! I loved this chapter, the ninjas having fun while driving Clutch crazy is great. Clutch finally giving in and playing defensive golf too was awesome. And then they all start trying to better define the rules... Just like a bunch of kids making up a new game!

I have enjoyed every chapter of this story, but I have especially enjoyed the chapters with the ninjas. I love their idea of 'defensive golf'.

Hahaha Clutch should have shut his mouth while he was a head! Great chapter keep up the great writing -

Haha! Loved it! Leave it to Storm Shadow to figure fighting into golf...

Also, those poor caddies. Hope they get big tips.

“not the kneecap!” (snort!)

This story is priceless!

Please Continue!

Oh man, you had me laughing from start to finish, especially when Tommy was talking about the "old, honorable" game of golf. I can see this as a new way to train young ninjas, Battle Golf, while letting the oldtimers have fun at the same time. If my words make no sense, I blame laughter. Until next time.

ninja golf for the win! silly clutch, he doesn't realize the chaos he's unleashed, aww to snake defending shana's ball like that, very nice of him

you rock, as does ninja golf, looking forward to what comes next, too bad none of the caddies has a video recorder

BWA-!

I think I cracked a rib.

I like their idea of golf. makes more sense.

keep up the great work.

Haha! I actually feel sorry for Clutch. I do love that he finally gave in, because 'if you can't beat them, join them.' It figures that he'd find a way to piss Scarlett off. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I would love to go out on the course with these guys. It'd be funner than I'm usually accustom to. I loved the comment by Clutch about Scarlett having Snakes balls in a jar...too funny!

Looking forward to more when you have time!.

Oh, god I love Clutch so much. Sorry I'm not logged in to review - at work. But I just wanted to tell you that I absolutely adore this fic and always look forward to reading more of your writing!

LMAO! Flint so deserved a golf ball to the head. Great chapter. Happy Labor Day!

ROFLAMO might need morphine i don't think aspirin is gonna cut it