My favourite line? "Demetri is here every month and he'll spend his ten minutes slamming the government or standing up against some malicious intent by "the man." But then, you already knew that. :)

That story was beautiful ladies! Thank you for writing!

It's while you were sleeping, twilight style!

I love it!

I love While You Were Sleeping, so i thought this was amazing!

Adorable alternative to "While you were sleeping'.

Making Edward a musician was a nice touch as he serenaded Bella nightly.

jansails/jan2

Just Love It!

Better than the movie.

XOXO

Even with having watched the movie before, the story completely captivated me. I didn't mind one bit it being your inspiration and have recently been thinking up a number of movies I wish would be written Twi-style. And, can I just say, it is refreshing having Jacob in the story. I'm Team Edward, but I still feel like the love triangle that ran throughout the Twilight series doesn't get nearly enough play in fanfic. I think it makes BE stories all the more enjoyable when Edward isn't the only guy in the world to fall for Bella. Caz, c'mon, she's awesome. Great job to both authors! :)

Super cute!

The pleasure was all mine-I loved writing with you! And uh, some people seem to truly fail at reading comprehension. Just sayin. ;)

Great romance story ! Their story is not conventional but really beautiful !

It's written well :)

Delph

You copied that plot from the movie: 'While You Were Sleeping' You just changed the leading lady's job to a coffee girl. Boo! make something original