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| Christine Ruud 2007-06-22 ch 1,  | abuseAw...sweet. |
| 'loha 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseIs this a PiperCole fic?Unrequited love? Sounds like it. Good all the same |
| Badgirl21 2004-05-28 ch 1, | abuseI liked that Piper was accepting Cole into the family. I also liked that Phoebe and Cole are in love and stuff. |
| Barb6 2002-08-30 ch 1, | abuseI wonder if we will ever see Piper and Cole this close again? Excellent story - I hope we get to see a good wedding soon. |
| Ivy3 2002-05-05 ch 1, | abuseNice, I like it Ivy |
| margaritanightly 2002-04-14 ch 1, | abuseLike a gem that sparkles in a desert mine field. Hope you keep writing. :) |
| Cindy 2002-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was a very enjoyable story. It's fun when writers take a scene and expand it beyond the original story line. The banter between Cole, Phoebe and Piper was very true to the spirit of the characters. Thank you. |
| Trunks Ichijouji 2002-04-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was good. If they were to have started the episode earlier, your story would've been a great beginning. |
| Barb 2002-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt is so great to read a good chapter about Phoebe and Cole! Thank you for a welcome diversion from the show's current story line. I'm glad you filled in the pieces with Piper giving Cole Grams's ring. |
| Neptune 2002-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseWowwie, that was really good. You captured the characters' dialogue perfectly. I could totally see this happening on an episode of Charmed. And Mrs. D is so cool! Loved the repair man joke, by the way ;o) Keep writing great stuff like this. |
| Maggie 2002-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseFantastic. Great use of dialogue and knowledge of the characters. I'd love to read more. Finally a little bonding between the ex-demon and one of the sisters. |
| Lilian 2002-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, Shel, that was beautiful!. You really captured their essence right--- and I liked Mrs. D a lot!. This is just what I needed, with all the mess going on in the show. To be remembered that above all, Phoebe and Cole are a wonderful couple, and that tenderness was always a part of their life, even if now it's pretty much gone. I hope you have more where this one came from! |
| Amber 2002-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is really good! This is exactly how I would've pictured Piper giving Cole the ring. |
| Cathie 2002-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseLoved it!! It was a great story. Sorry to say I never read any of your other stories, but i defintly will now. |