|Reviews for Long Live|
| SaMiha2624 4/28/13 . chapter 1
Despite the fact I'm crying right now ,I have to give you the credit for this story , it's really sad,I think it was one of the most incredibley good story I have ever read ,the least I could do is drop a review,right?
| Meepyonnee 4/5/13 . chapter 1
I cried. Dammit.
| Asdfghjkl 3/29/13 . chapter 1
I hate you this made me cry so much! I mean, it was beautifully written but you are cruel and sadistic .
| A 13 year old 2/27/13 . chapter 1
Okay I'm a HUGE fan of Taylor Swift, so I listen to her songs like everyday. So now every time I listen to Long Live, I feel like crying! It was one of my favorite songs too. Thanks, really. ;)
Sad beautiful tragic, turned into a beautiful story, nice job! :)
| Sally 1/28/13 . chapter 1
What in literally crying! Your supposed to make happy endings! That was not a happy ending :( Waaaaahhhh if it wasn't such a good story And if you weren't one of my favorite authors if be mad about it. I just love the whole "You and me, us against the world" thing it was so beautiful! :')
Great story, sad sending :(
| aurora0914 1/28/13 . chapter 1
is there a sequel?
| Him and Me 10/20/12 . chapter 1
This is, without a doubt, one of the most beautiful fan fictions I have ever read. The plot wasn't cliche, for me, and the whole story was very impressive. You managed to put their personalities into a completely different level, which made me completely speechless. You, MHR, are a very talented person which the aspiring artists ought to know.
| vna 8/29/12 . chapter 1
i just bawled my eyes out! gosh, dis is so sweet but tragic..luv it for writing dis.
| Guest2222 8/13/12 . chapter 1
| Rawrrx3 8/13/12 . chapter 1
The realisticness (if that's a word) and sadness overflowing. It was very sad and damn right I cried my eyes out :). I feel the pain and love from both natsume and mikan here. Realistic touch with drama Great! I'm only 12 and love to read fanfics and books to bad my mind is full of imagining all the time that would never happen (unless having a little stuff animal thingy that talks and turns to a full creature named haru in my life would happen and much MUCH more) my life would be complete x3. But writing is about unleashing your inmaganation flow out origality (and secret wishes) and you did great to bad no flying dragons were involved :D . I feel like mikan that your story portrays. SORRY! Cool cool.. So um.. Awesome? Continue imagining (or expirencing) and make more wonders so I can read up to 4am and cry to myself THE EFFECT you do! Haha love your passion for stories BAI! bAI!
| MidnightShadows26 8/11/12 . chapter 1
I literally cried, this was such a beautiful story and a great sequel to Footprints. Poor Natsume, he's lost without Mikan.
| Guest 7/1/12 . chapter 1
OH MY GOD...WHY, why T.T Why did you kill off Mikan MHR.
I am your biggest fan tho, ur stories are the only ones correct grammer etc and n amazing plotlines. i HEART U MHR but this story is too sad.
| Mxnlovely 6/4/12 . chapter 1
Damn! Best tear jerking fic ever!
I really hate you for making me cry but this story is just amazing! Whoa! My heart just sunked at mikan's words. "us against the world" and the fact that she's dying already! F*ck! And making Natsume promise to tell his future kids about her! I still can't stop crying. I was reading this while listening to the actual song long live by taylor swift. God! It just crushed my heart down to it's very last pieces! Keep writing! God gave you a very wonderful talent.
| asdfghjklnatsu97 5/21/12 . chapter 1
awww. that was sooo sad :'( . i cried when natsume was stopping mikan from saying anything. :(
i thought someone bullied mikan.. :'( that would be more better.
sigh. anyway. awesome story. i love it very much, even tho it made me cry. :)
| LittleLiar666 5/18/12 . chapter 1
Damn you. You made me cry.