Too sweet. Reminds me of when Rika and Renamon first Biomerged-she asked Takato if he was all right. Think he's one of the main people she wants to protect? Keep up the good work!

cool

good poetry, was it poetry?

ah well it was good anyways

with a few changes this would be a great christian poem, but don't worry i ain't dis'en what cha got here its really good. i hope to see more of ur poems soon! Jade