Oh, my goodness! This was so beautiful, and so, so sad! You really captured Piggy wonderfully, and his dreams of London were so tragic.

Very well written. An absolutely beautiful piece.

OMIGOSH You totally CAN write LOTF with or without slash. This is...this is just really thoughtful. A look in Piggy, which is rare, and it just points out so poignantly that even though he is so mature and supposed to represent the intelligence of civilized society he is still a /boy/ and boys dream and hope and imagine things. This is so sad and so sweet. Thanks for sharing and good luck with your 50 prompts. :)