I know how you feel.

Sometimes things tend to get in the way, but this is really staring to build up.

Don't stop now.

:)

Great chapters!

Senora is an awesome character. To me she seems so (and correct me if I'm wrong) human in a way.

And Burke is just too cute. I loved his grammar moment in chapter 8.

Nice job.

This is starting to get very interesting. Can't wait to read more.

:D

This is an interesting story so far, very unusal but good! I would like to see where this goes. Keep writing.

I think it's a great story, although I got a little confused. :)