great story...

with good and bad moment their lives go on...

they deserve to be happy _

Interesting way to deal with the kunos...I never took them to be insane, only stubborn, and slightly ignorant. other than that, I think this was another well done, and in character chapter. good job, I wonder if you intend to keep going with this story? it seems a good place to stop, but at the same time, I find myself looking forward to future chapters. so in all reality it is up to you, but you've given your readers a wonderful story. good job.

Live, Love and Laugh,

DragonJack, ..

beautiful. good job.

again, it feels a little rushed, but other than that, it works quite well. I'm glad you didn't spare us the dirty details, it adds a sense of realism to the story, and in this story I think it's necessary. it was an interesting twist to the technique "soul of ice" that I had not considered, making the assumption that it is a conscious mental technique, but I suppose given enough time the mind can do strange things. well done.

this is a Dark chapter, well written, but perhaps a little rushed. I don't know how you could have slowed it down, but it went a little fast to my perception. I believe you did another good job though. it wrenched my heart to read it.

in every story I've read so far, Akane has attempted to kill ryoga, or ranma and even if they did work it out, it put undue stress and while not feeling fake, had an unease to it. I like this version of acceptance and maturity, in that she turned to the feelings of betrayal rather than anger, and that Ranma was there for her. good work again.

whoa. that was the first word that came to mind after reading this. It's like you took the words right out of my mouth. It doesn't feel rushed, it's well worded and completely in character. And other than a few choice word differences, I wouldn't have written it any other way. to my knowledge there aren't any grammar or spelling errors, nor misplaced words. over all this chapter is well written, I look forward to reading the rest of it.

Live, Love and Laugh,

DragonJack, ..

Great story... I just love Ranma 1/2 it's very interesting to me! Again the story was good, I hope to read all of your other stories sometime soon! Good work!

Wow. This was a very emotional chapter. I actually found myself tearing up when Kasumi was talking to Ranma at the beginning. And I love the way Akane and Ranma act around each other, now that they've admitted how they feel. AKA: That scene in the school... Wow. That was... that was hot.

I really just love all of your stories- and this one is no different. I can't wait to read more. :)

I highly enjoy the pandamoniun (spelling?) that ensues in the story, and how they still manage to be happy! Update soon please! there will be an update correct?

Na

It's a shame the Kuno's were committed. I think Tatewaki can be relatively sane at times, Kodachi I don't really care for. But anywho...A great story! Depressing and freaky at times, which is your specialty, but also with the happy ending I die for. It's really entrancing, it's hard to remember that you're just reading a story instead of actually seeing it. Really great.

Okay, I like these characters better than the ones Takahashi writes, but they are in fact different. More fun, easier to work with, easier to identify with, but definately different.

That was completely awesome. Please keep going, I hope it isn't the end. You work really hard on this. Most people just write quick chapters that have little to no length. I greatly appreciate how much you've put into this. I put alot into mine, but the formatting got messed up. If you're interested. It's not a Ranma 1/2 story, it's in the category for a movie called A Walk To Remember, but it's not the characters or both actors, just one. It's called Behind the Spotlight. Please continue this, it's up in the top three for the best I've read. I won't say which because I don't want to make anyone mad. Thank you.-Irish

I just loved this story. i really hope u would write more

Great story, loved every chapter. :D