Wow...is that real? Very sad...

Good LORD, that was bad. I couldn't tell left from right in that mess of words that's supposed to be fanfiction.

We at Insane Critic also review horrible fics, but the worst part is: they're decently-worded and written. It proves that they can spell, but can't write stories worth a dime.

That...that fic is the true love-child of Mary Sues and crack-fics.

But I honestly thought this chapter was more overly dramatic that funny. I mean seriously, who would kill themselves of a fic? While it is terrible, I just have to remember that it is for humor purposes only.

But still, good job.

That was funny, thought of doing one of mine yet. :)

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

...I feel like this was supposed to be a parody of a Sue-fic, but it failed even at that. PLEASE GOD TELL ME SOMEONE WASN'T SERIOUS WHEN THEY WROTE THAT. *shudder*

I can't believe such a fic exists, the trolls are overdoing themselves (serious, I laughed with "ur dad reiped me!", I don't know if should have done that). The presentation was good, with all the dramatic angst necessary with tainted fics like this. I'm a fan of reviewing fics like yours and I really think your presentation evolved from the second chapter, because, besides you, you have five guests and it can be a little hard to administrate the time and lines of each one, but so farkeep going!

hi

We need more fic reviwers.

If you fancy some phineas and ferb, take a look at some of my stuff. Or if you like spongebob, see Help wanted: the musical

W000000T! I loved this chapter for very obvious and completely egotistical reasons.

On the subject of your brother walking in on you changing, a fact of which I was not aware when I wrote this fic: I SWEAR TO GOD, I WILL FOREVER IMAGINE YOUR BROTHER AS TUFFNUT. SOMEDAY I AM GOING TO MEET HIM AND I WILL BE LIKE, "WTF, YOU ARE NOT TUFFNUT, GTFO!"

and lol, even though I knew Ruffnut freaking out at her tattoo was coming, I still loved it. And BAHAHA GROUP ORGIES. You know it happens. Sometimes Snotlout just brings out that mead and Ruffnut has a little too much and away go those inhibitions...

OMG, thank you for my score! *flap* I'm totes mentioning this in the next chapter of CoaTV (don't worry, Ruffnut, it's coming soon!)! It is okay if I mention this fic, right?

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

i know i said you'd never hear from me again but i have to know am i forgiven now i need a straight answer and how long it will take until i'm forgiven

To be perfectly honest, the only character I'm familiar with is Ruffnut (I think the March Hare you have here is from Tim Burton's version, which I have yet to see), but...I'd totes love to see what Ruffnut had to say about something I wrote. XD

Also the mental image of Ruffnut giving the Vulcan sign makes my life. And also Hiccup's. *slyface*

Welcome to the world of fanfic critiquing. I hope to see great things from you. As for requests, how about you take a gander at my Seinfeld fanmake, or one of Skatoonyfan1234's stuff?

Have a wonderful whatever,

Gokiburi Prince

Oooh, yay, another fanfic critic. D

Perhaps you should look at one of Skatoonyfan1234's fanmakes or anything done by SpongeNSpongegirl.

Wow. We need more critics in here and I'm glad you opened up. I'm also happy at what you said in the beginning that it's only for fun and that you have no intention of hurting peoples' feelings.

What the heck, I'll take a shot at this.

You could review my stories if you would like. I have 11 completed stories and 25 stories I need to work on. I don't have a specific story you can review, but maybe you can review like all of my stories. Like what scenes you liked out of all of them, what scenes you dislike, and how I should improve.

I wouldn't mind it at all and it seems kinda fun. Plus, I would like others to read my stories as well.

Anyway, I hope this helps and I can't wait to see the first review!

Ever thought of reviewing mine? A lot of people like it and it's my 1st so it would be nice to see what you think about it. It's a parody of Aladdin (very original I know XD) but I think you might like it and it can be fun to see what you cook up about it.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'