Great, luv it!
More please! xx

please update? this is a really great story :) 3

You HAVE to keep writing!

Yes, CARRY ON WRITING!

Maybe it carries on and Jess gets jelous because Chris wouldn't carry on after he knew she was a school girl. And Chris is all "I don't know what to do!" and Mia's like "Don't do anything!".And Jess convinces Vicky to help her get Chris get caught but something else happens that changes the whole perspective BUT not a pregnancy, that is so common for a fan fiction story. Maybe it turns out that Mia had HIV but she didn't know and maybe Chris catches gets treated and is really ill at school and people keep on asking "Whats wrong?" and he's like I'm just a bit ill thats all and somewon recognises the symtoms as the symptoms from HIV treatment! OMG!;-D

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

I think obviously Chris trys to give her the 'BIG MISTAKE' speach after class but it ends up not how he expected and maybe they kiss and nearly get caught or he gets drunk and they do it at school and get caught by another pupil. Maybe she tells Jess she slept with somewon but doesn't say who then Jess walks in on them in the science lab and is really jealous becuase it is just like what happened to her. Maybe then Jess tries to come on to Chris and Mia sees and she gets mad at Chris and slaps him infront of a whole load of people and the other teachers are like What? Because this could be all part of Jess's jealousy filled plan to get Chris RUMBLED!

Ah! Now I like where this is going! I can't wait to see what Chris says to her the next day!

The ending was better in this chapter; it wasn't rushed, and left a nice cliffy for us readers to hang on to for the next chapter!

I still think you could try and make these longer, as the story is really good! But chapters are still quite short, and with such a great storyline it would be good if they were longer! :)

I can't wait to see the next chapter, good luck!

Soso xx

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Maybe things should keep on happening which makes them be alone together and every time Mia comes on to him! And then it sort of esculates from that like they get caught or Mead gets drunk and they go all the way!

Really loving it!

Cant wait till you finish writing the next chapter so I can read it!

xxx

Cant wait to read the rest.

I'm really hooked.

Keep writting!

;-D

I liked it! Very much! The only thing I was disappointed in was the fact that the pairing came in too quick. It's like you're not making your readers wait for more chapters to build on the main story. I can only hope something good happens to rock their relations!

I still feel like it's rushed; you could have wrote much more between the dialogue for Chris and Mia to make things more intense between them.

I do like the storyline very much though! So I am looking very forward to reading more when you next update!

Soso xx

loved it

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I quite like this chapter :) The story seems like it could be a good one! Just try to make the chapters longer (Aim for 1000). If you struggle just describe more things to help set the scene.

I think the ending of this chapter needed a bit more work, it seemed a bit rushed? Maybe describing a few events of the week would have worked, like she could have walked into the wrong toilets or managed to be the subject of gossip being the new girl?

Anyway, I wish you luck with this story and am looking forward to your upcoming chapters!

Soso xx

Sounds great so far, looking forward to more! xo