My God, I thought I'd by dead from laughing XD Dawn is so... so... so cliché! She's a girl in her whole splendour. (Hope you can say it ")

Totally loved that fic. Thanks for that little piece of art!

I loved this fic :3 It was cute and adorable and just plain hilarious. I loved Dawn's air-headedness, the way Gary frequently face-palmed himself, how you revealed that Brock never really had his eyes open (that thing with the lake was hilarious), the little glare-off between Gary and Paul, the "who is the secret admirer" episode where Lance kept popping up as the possible answer, and simply just everything. The characters were in tact, they were every bit as lovable as they always were, the whole thing was sweet and adorable. I loved the poem (or what we knew of it) and I wish we could've seen the full version! :D

Thanks for writing this It was fantastic!

I think this is the only Gary/Ash fic I've enjoyed; I've been searching for two days.

Aw, so adorable! I love Palletshipping but there are so many cheesy and not-well written fanfics that I've really started to dislike this pairing. Now after reading your fic, it makes me LOVE palletshipping again. Thank you!

This is too cute for words, especially when you added Pikachu's point of view at the end. *w*b Also lol at Gary's (kind of?) dorkiness and Ash's obliviousness, thumbs up!

Ah, what a fantabulous writer you are!

I found this quite entertaining to read. It was funny and cute in a good way. You kept me interested the whole time, which is pretty awesome considering the fact that I almost always lose interest in "cute" fics rather quickly. But yours was good and written so nicely! You had me laughing throughout on several occasions :D.

Top marks and thoroughly enjoyable!

Cheers!

x

Oh my gosh, this is utterly amazing. Can't stop laughing.

Automatic favourite _

Why is everything grouped up in the middle? It, in my opinion, makes it difficult to read and take seriously. Is there any chance that you can change this? :D

So, so cute! And IC! I never even read Pokemon fics but this one drew me in. I love it so much!

Aww So CUTE! Great story ]

The last line is rhe cutest thing ever!

Two updates since I reviewed last. Keep up the good work.

PS: Sent a message. Someone is drawing Xelik for me.

So cute! Great story!

Awww, this was so cute! I've only read three good palletshipping fics and I have to say this is number one on my list. I love this story, so much. You should make another one or continue this one, if you don't that's okay. Oh yeah one more thing you're an excellent writer.

Love! I kinda wish you'd continue, but if you don't want to, fine.