I like it. PLease write more.

LIKED IT! :) hope you update soon.

I think its great that Jesse and Larson are getting along.

Poor Ducks! Oh well. Nice Chapter, write more soon, and Aerosmith RULES!

Wanna know some ironies. My 'rents are upstairs right now watching Multiplicity and my fave band is Aerosmith.

Another good chapter.

This is a good story. Sad about Adam though.

Poor Adam! Oh well, he seems to be made to suffer(C-3PO rules!) ne way, write more soon!

Peter's last name is Mark but it doesn't really matter *grins* Wow I'm surprised with the roster. I was for sure that One of the bash brothers would make varsity. I also notice that Adam's name isn't on either list. I know that he is still rehabing his wrist and might not be ready for the next season but you would think that they would put them on the roster anyways. Hmmm...interesting.

YEE HAW! *grins* What a nice surprise find after a long night of homework. Good job!

ooo, go Jesse, go Jesse. Write more soon!

its great... write chapter 5 as soon as possible.

I had actually been thinking of that when I got to the end of the chapter. That's a good question. Hmm I mean the coach thing. Maybe I'll take that out

It's a good chapter but I have a question I don't understand the sentence "That had only been two months ago a year of pranks and fun along with pain but when did things fall apart." I don't understand what Adam means when he thinks things fell apart. His he refering to his wrist and rehabing it, the fact that the coaches might not want him back so soon at the start of the season, or is it something yet to be explained?

This seems like it'll turn out to be a cool story so keep going!

lol, I wouldn't have been surprised if Jesse did punch Larson. But oh well, he is nice now. Nice chapter and write more soon!