 Dapo 1/28/03 . chapter 1 I have just finished reading your epic story and I had to let you know how impressed I am with the story.
Your knowledge of pre-crisis DC is fantastic!
The best bit about your story was how all the violence was affecting Kara and how she just wanted to quit. Another strength is your description of fight secenes, some of these rang so true, much better that the wimp out versions we get in the actual comics.
In all well done.
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