Your writing is brilliant, I love it! The thief and the cobbler really was Richard Williams masterpiece, even though he never got to finish it. While other little girls dreamt of princes or knights, there I was obsessively watching the theif and the cobbler, adoring Tack. He is just too freaking adorable. Please continue the story!

Really well done, every bit as enchanting as the (recobbled) movie I hope you can find time to continue this story.

Best chapter so far! I can not wait for the next chapter, I hope you do make another chapter, its really good! I loved how Tack had trouble getting on his horse, and when they ate dinner together, it was simply wonderful. And then they kissed! XD Brilliant!

I love this story alot, im subscribing you/faving you and this story. This story is just to good to pass up.

If only people made more Thief and The Cobbler storys! The Thief and the Cobbler is a really good movie, people should watch it!

OMG a Horse, I Didnt expect that! xD

I loved how you made Tack's story, it suits him perfectly. Also the suggestion for a break was genius.

So far so good, I love the fact that she helped saved him. If only more people knew about the Thief and The Cobbler, but not many people watched the movie.