This is just what I would imagine Rory to say to his infant daughter. So touching

Very sweet! And ditto times a thousand to what Nimbus said

Very sweet! And ditto times a thousand to what Nimbus said

Aww, so sweet. I would like to see the scene where The master presents Melody to Amy, Rory and the Doctor.

Aww. Very sweet, very Rory, and I love your words.

I like the capitalization of 'That Time', and all the other works references. Rory's description of the Doctor is lovely, and the son-in-law comment is great- yeah, I can see that being unsettling.

"where he has very good friends that look a bit like Cthulhu but are nice. And psychic." I love that line.

I now have a great image of them all living in an igloo.

Thanks!

This was lovely :). Really enjoyed it :)

That was really Amazing. Go Rory the Roman!

Very short, very sweet, nice writing. I admit, I like the idea that it's a letter to Melody and expresses her parent's hopes.

I hope that you delve into the idea and expand it more :D