Interesting! You should definitely write more! :) I like the idea of a Harry/Thomas pairing...they definitely have a connection to be explored. I also really enjoyed having another POV from Thomas.

You are a disturbing, creepy, horrible person to slash these two characters together...

I mean they are freaking RELATED!

jeez

Wow

Thomas with anyone is hot enough - but Thomas with Harry has all sorts of delicious dark twisty yum to it. So much more than the usual "but ... we're both men!" thing.

You wrote this beautifully - so true to the characters voices - and the emotion only adds to the sweetness of the * ahem * other stuff. I loved hearing their thoughts about each other - the change of POV from Harry's in the other stories in this series to Thomas in this one was lovely.

Looking forward to seeing where you might take this. Please continue :)

Mwah!

Seriously love these...

I'm VERY picky when it comes to fanfiction, I expect professional quality, spelling, grammar, etc.

And (at least in these three) you have that!

I only noticed one or two little things in the first one, and they clearly weren't big enough to bother me. I can't even remember what they are now.

So in short, these are fabulous, I NEED more...

Please feed my new addiction.

And no, no idea what the 'verse should be titled. But it really doesn't matter to me, so long as you keep writing these.

Oh and I send these to a friend of mine too. She'll review soon, she just needs to organise her thoughts first.

I am so, so glad you continued writing about Harry/Thomas. And it's, well, tasteful. Which is kinda rare. I'm really excited to see you write about what other people will think about Thomas and Harry, though I am curious to see how you'll deal with Justine. It seemed like Thomas is still in love with her, from what you've written. As for other people- will it be from Harry and or Thomas' POV, or theirs'? Have you ever thought about having Thomas back Harry up in front of the White Council, or Wardens, or The Senior Council? I guess I'm just thinking that if they're going to be together together (by the way, the description/vision you had Harry have of the road with a relationship with Thomas and the one without was so freakin' awesome and cool) people are gonna find out. And I can't think they'll react well. As for a 'verse name- What About the Untrodden Path, or Road Not Taken, or something to do with a path. Your description of roads in Harry's vision got me thinking about the saying with the path not taken and stuff. Have a good very early morning!