I'm guessing this is the DomLorcan drabble you told me about? Poor Rose...I like the pairing of Rose/Lorcan, but I can really picture him fawning over older, beautiful Dominique. This really makes you feel for Rose in this, and even for Lorcan too because he can't get Dom. This is really well-written and I really love it!

Awww, Lovisa, this was just so cute!

I love how the whole reference to Alice in Wonderland happened, with the Mad Hatter - that's just soawesome!

And how Scorpius brougght her an apple1 I loved it!

You know I adore your wriitng and i just want MORE xxxx

LOVISA!

&hearts

i haven't spoken to you in FOREVER! :O

and i love this, btw.

it's so curte nad i love the idea of them being in a shop adn buying towels haha...and the whole thing about Luna wanting to go to Africa then settling on was just ingenious! xxxx

OH HI I'M BACK! :D And I've read everything I've missed and you are awesome as always!

I love this, oh my gosh. The way you portray Roxanne's thoughts is spot on; you really capture the jealousy and messy emotions that she's feeling. I love Molly, but right here I felt so frustrated at her because I was totally rooting for Roxanne and Scorpius. It's not often I feel so strongly about things like this, so great job on that!

Brilliant work as usual!

Wow, Lo, this was great! I adore the whole Dominique-being-jealous-of-Victoire scenario, and the fact that it's Louis comforting her is just fab. I also loved the way you describe the beach and how it doesn't matter how many times Louis sees it, it always looks different. I thought that was a lovely bit of detail to put in and that it really added to the scene.

Oh, and Dominique being great at Quidditch is a win too!

Brilliant job, and keep writing! :)

Oh, poor Hugo, having all these expectations and all this build up to his first kiss with this girl and then finding out she's not who he wants. So easy to relate to as well.

I love how your Lily just starts off teasing him relentlessly but then stops and asks him about it, she sounds like such a good cousin to have!

And, aha, the ending is great. I hope he doesn't have a repeat of his experience with Laura, though. ;)

Great work! :)

Oh, god Lo this was absolutely wonderful. There was so much I loved about it, I don't even know where to begin.

The entire second paragraph is fantastic, I love the imagery you use and the idea of the dust particles being an abstract painting. Such a unique idea!

"like he was an artist exploring every shadow and line of her face, but not with a pen, only with his gaze" this is /gorgeous/, seriously. The idea of him being an artist and her face being the canvas... seriously beautiful!

Amazing job on this one!

Aww! :3 Another stupidly adorable piece! Lily and Jack are great together, I love how she thinks of them as a cliché but doesn't really mind at all. You can tell how much he loves her through this, and the fact that it was his first kiss is so cute. And the last line is brilliant, I'm sure he would want to try and see if his second is as good. ;)

Amazing job!

Oh my gosh, Lo, this was /so/ adorable. I have the biggest smile on my face, seriously. Your Scorpius is the cutest thing ever. :3 Can I have him?

I love his possessiveness of Teddy and how he eventually comes round to Victoire. Such a little kid! :D

Great work!

OMG Lovisa, this was sooo cutie pie!

I adored how you wrote it and how it seemed almost dreamlike, since there was absolutely no trace of it afterwards!

I love how you had twinny boy Lysander being the snorer adn that's why he was with Vic - though Teddy/Vic is mine forever, it was pretty amazing!

Vicky x

Ooh, what a unique idea! (yay, Sweden! ;)

I love this one a lot - even though she barely speaks, I get a real feel for Rose's character. She stands out here and she's very realistic. I love your descriptions, especially "ugly blossoms", for some reason. Maybe because it's such an un-poetic (yeah, I'm making up words now) idea, it really jumped out at me which was great.

And the last line was brilliant. I always love the ideas of characters learning to appreciate home for some reason.

Great work!

Oh, gosh, I haven't reviewed in forever, I'm sorry!

But Lo, you have /got/ to stop being so amazing, it's so not fair. ;) Firstly, I love how you capture the sibling relationship in this - I can tell how close they are from just a few paragraphs! The way you write them is just great, seriously. I love their interactions too, they just seem to flow really well.

Great job on this one! :)

this was so sweet. positively squealworthy, really.

seven-year-old scorpius is so CUTE. and his proposal made me giggle and want to scream at the adorableness of it all.

and how he was taking the proposal so seriously? it. was. ADORABLE. i'm at a loss for words.

AHHHHH.

basically, i really really liked this. (:

keep writing!

xx avril

I love how short and sweet this is, so to speak, because I have the shortest attention span ever when it comes to reading FF. And you manage to pack it with such detail and brilliant descriptions and tidbits of emotion and oh my goodness I love this. Keep writing? :)

-acciobutterbeer