Hey, just read you're story. An interesting concept. Maybe the boys would like to play a card game that a friend of mine came up with, if you want the details of the game just send me a message and I'll get right back to you.

The pleasure was all mine,
Alangrieal

It's really odd. The story of the bogeyman (Brad) and the vampire children feel like elements of different stories, but they don't exactly clash. Don't leave us hanging about who this guy is and if he's going to haunt Rico for the rest of her days.

cool story ^^ Melchiah's so kawaii
you could let the kids play games other kids play, like erm. tag, hide and seek. or some lil war game in teams, like Zephon, Turel and Rahab vs. Melchiah, Dumah and Raziel. this is probably stupid, but just suggesting
and about that demon.. can't Kain just handle it?

NIce, keep writting.
And it was fuuunyyy! specialy that part of the man with a feather in the hat, ji ji ji

well u could like be playing cards and then kain shouts on her or something and asks about brad and she gotta explain all about him and then they here a wee scream and brad is comming for the kids and then he..... well u can think of something cause u are a kool writter

*chuckles*

I LOVE baby-sitting stories...and Brad is a great name for a "demon"!

Also...little baby vamps play "Unhappy Families" and "Jenga".

Don't ASK about the Jenga, I was tortured with it when young.

*sniffles...Raziel pats V.A. on the shoulder sympathetically*

AW! Kawaii! That's cool ^_^

Hope you add more soon!!

Serpantine: Brad?

*shrugs and continues to smile*

~Kobura and Serpantine

*smiles* Cute! *cuddles Melchiah* A ghost named Brad? Hmmm... backstory please! ^_^

who's this Brad?!

and people thought living stalkers were bad!