Awsome story guys! I really like it. Please continue! Can I just say that Dani is my favorite DP character and I am really annoyed that (as far as I know) she hasn't come up in the games. I love the acronym L.o.s.e.r.s! Please continue!.
On the topic of Dani does her human half have a last name? Because aso far as I know she doesn't but I thought I'd ask? Anyway do I have to say it a third time? Update!

Wow, this is so good. :) I'm glad somebody's delving into the Mawgu's final words and making a story for it. So far, what you two have written is great and enjoyable to read.

Do you mind if I borrow you're Jimmy and Danny meeting part. Just as a reference for my stories. I've been brainstorming for months for an idea for how those two met, and you're idea is perfect. If not, that's okay too. Just thought I'd ask. :)

I am really enjoying the story, and can't wait for an update! :D

Red hair? That's either Jazz or... OH NO! Also, I'm kinda surprised that everyone else wasn't surprised to see ach other. Still, not bad.

Uh-oh, this doesn't look good for the heroes.

*gasp* Pun from that new FOP episode, "When L.O.S.E.R.S Attack!" They were the League of Super Evil Renge Seekers - wow, the name is so very close!

This is a pretty good story. I'm waiting semi-patiently for the next chapter.

The L.O.S.E.R.S., eh? Nice one, Calamitous. :

I'm liking this so far, and here's hoping you continue it. Keep up the good work!

This is good are you going to finish it?

NOT THE SHOWER! ANYTHING BUT THAT! D8 lol, jk XP

Anyway... How come you guys are so funny? D8 it's not fair... XP

Continue!

I really like this! I especially liked the flashback. I'm a sercet Phan too.

Great so far! I like the " get lost" aspect of the story.

Also, the overweight man is Mr. Lancer.

Great so far. I wish they had made another game... It tis a shame you guys don't know anything about Invader Zim. Amazing nonetheless.

Oh, and your author's notes are hiLARious!

XD I luv it X3

Holy crap I loved this! Continue!