|Reviews for The words that break us: TNPB verse|
| Xxshadows99xX 11/6/12 . chapter 2
Aww this was a sweet little story, I was wondering what happened during the three months mentioned in the other story.
| ForTheLoveOfDarren 1/13/12 . chapter 2
No one can see it but I totally just soaked my own shirt crying like a baby. Amazing job :)
| ViperDaisy 8/19/11 . chapter 2
Yay for happy endings! Glad they got everything worked out. Kurt and Puck make such a good couple in my opinion.
But while I did enjoy the story itself, I had one major complaint. I could probably count on one hand the number of times I saw a comma in both chapters. You need a comma and/or some kind of conjunction to separate the different ideas in each sentence.
So in this sentence: "Dad can I have dinner with Dad and Aunt Sarah we're going to work on my solo?" you could put a comma between "Dad" and "can," as well as been "Sarah" and "we're." This makes those longer sentences a lot easier to read and understand. A beta could definitely help with this, as well as catching typos that you miss. Just something to think about!
| Utena-Puchiko-nyu 7/3/11 . chapter 2
I love this work :3
| Utena-Puchiko-nyu 7/3/11 . chapter 1
Yay finaly! I was waiting for this too ;D
| TheFutureMrKarofsky 7/3/11 . chapter 2
You are *officially* the greatest person EVER!(this week) for writing this story! I was totally curious as to what brought the 3-month separation in TNPB, and you hit the nail on the head perfectly. And great way to end this piece with such a happy and humorous moment, considering the amount of tears I shed before that.
| eb012203 7/3/11 . chapter 2
Ah! Amazing! I'm so glad that you posted this!