It was super nice to finally find a Francesco love story on here! It was very sweet and Francesco is such a great character. I agree with the others and wish it was longer! Excellent job though. :)

well I liked the idea, and I liked the ending, but it was rushed and could have been extended into a great story with more detail. it seemed more like an outline for a story instead of the actual story...

You write Francesco well, and I REALLY like the idea of a love story featuring him (It's giving me my own ideas for OCs who could be compatible with him!), but I have to be honest and say this felt kinda shallow.

Franchesco seems to fall in love with her only for her looks, but then next chapter he's suddenly gushing about how she's different and she's "pure, honest and true" and how she makes him a better person, when all I saw of her character when they met was just another fangirl.

It's just.. you keep SAYING how great their relationship is and SAYING how it changes Francesco, but I don't see any evidence of that in the story. As much as I like the idea behind the plot. I'm sorry to say that I have trouble caring about this relationship. (sweatdrop)

(Also, ffn has a rule against multiple chapters without using the chaptering system. You could get in trouble for that. ;;;;;

I like this little story. Short, sweet and to the point, but you could have extended this quite easily if you wanted to.

Hope to see more short tales from your Francesco/Simone pairing.

Till next time.

Sevenstar.