 anon 10/23/02 . chapter 1 You've got all the right ingrediants here for a nice juicey sequel, it'll be like a horrible waste or tragedy to just stop the story like that. Or is that the point. To leave everyone on a cliffhanger practically begging and drowling for more, now that's down right nasty and cruel you bad person you. But come on humour us, the RIGHT thing needs to be done, REVENGE must be served and JUSTICE fought for the heartbroken poor souls, hurt by a selfish, conceited and cowardly act by a much trusted beloved friend in the believe of false hopes, dreams and promises if you get my drift.
Anyway personally it doesn't have to end up as a T/P fic(although they are my favorite couple in fanfics)I'm going to be realistic here and besides not everything has to end up with a happy ending I just would really like it if Trunks gets what's coming to him for his actions.
Love the story keep it up. |
 anonomous 4/26/02 . chapter 1 I can't believe he walked out like that! |
 anon 4/12/02 . chapter 1 Nice fic! Trunks rocks! |
 Nyxity 4/12/02 . chapter 1Man... That was sad! Blah... I liked it very much though. Sigh, great stories! I love your stories! But i have to go back to biology. Ciao! |
 ills 4/12/02 . chapter 1that was sad |
 ViciousMisfit 4/11/02 . chapter 1awww thats sooo sad. ( Poor Pan. Next time she sees him, she should rip off his manhood and shove it down his throat! Hope the next chapter is up soon |
 GothPunkSkateChik 4/11/02 . chapter 1AAAAAAAAH trunks is an asshole...hate him in this story...please update soon..._ |
 S-Chan1 4/11/02 . chapter 1OK... where's the next chapter? I don't understand it was a simple screw if he fucked her and then left... please get chapter 2 up so I can decide if i'll contunie reading thiss tory cause it looks like a big fat *shudders* TM! |
 rosemine 4/11/02 . chapter 1 Ack! Trunks was jerk in this! Poor Pan! I hope this ends well! Can't wait for the next chapter. |