This is interesting! Please keep it going!

It is so sad, but I really like and its

evolutions are my favorite pokemon

Loved it! Eevee evolutions are my favourite Pokemon!

Great Story! Please write more!

This is a great story so far! It's based upon a good, solid concept. Very original. And it has Eons! YAY!

I always thought pokémon remembered their lives before they evolved after evolving, but I think it's cool that you make it so they forget. It leaves endless possibilities. :) Who knows what Krill could have forgotten!

Poor Zeb... She was too tired from hatching to swim in the bad weather. :(

Good story so far, keep it up! _