Very interesting thus far...some things to add later on to make it even better might include: Ash *eventually* figuring out a way to get his pokemon back; Gary finding out about his lineage and having to come to terms with it; a rape scene with Misty as the victim of the Rockets(they couldn't have been too happy about her interference); some other supporting characters showing up in the future. Feel free to use all of these!

I like this fic. Please do more. /generic review

More than a few puzzel peices, I guess we'll know soon enough where they lead to.

Interesting. I like it so far! Please continue.

I really like this, and I want to see more! *grins*

This is really good so far, keep it up! :)