 BF110C4 2/14/12 . chapter 3Now we can see Daria hitting the good guys hard for the first time, defeating them in the most complete way and then just causing untold destruction on the city. Also her reaction towards the town's fools is quite natural considering the circunstances. I do wonder how did Rita trained Daria to fight to such level.
I wonder how this close encounter with the Green Ranger is going to affect Quinn, it is not easy to be the lone survivor on a mayor terrorist strike (and the objetive was to cause terror). That is even more important if you do follow the scene you wrote of the Lullaby for Jane. The fact that she is able to recognize the Dragon Dagger should be from her perspective a matter of life and death.
I only got one complain with the chapter and that is that the last paragraph is the same one of chapter 5 and that is out of place in both places, here it is out of secuence, and since it is all of chapter 5 it is too thin and disconnected on it's current form. |