|Reviews for Loneliness|
| Eavenne 6/7/13 . chapter 1
| Edhla 5/5/13 . chapter 1
This was a poignant and nicely written little fic, and I enjoyed reading it. I did think thought that sometimes less could be more; the lines seemed to tell rather than show, especially here: "Tears would fall uncontrolled from somewhere deep inside calling out for something; something that could fill the lonely shell that was me. Wrapped in loneliness I lived out each day." I'm not sure you needed all of that; it might be more subtle and stronger to show her loneliness and misery rather than just have her telling the reader about it.
Anyway, very tightly written, and I enjoyed it. Thank you for writing x
| Izzi89 9/7/11 . chapter 1
It's good, A nice simple summery of what happened and it seems quite acurate.. nice work