Nice! Beautiful.

This was a poignant and nicely written little fic, and I enjoyed reading it. I did think thought that sometimes less could be more; the lines seemed to tell rather than show, especially here: "Tears would fall uncontrolled from somewhere deep inside calling out for something; something that could fill the lonely shell that was me. Wrapped in loneliness I lived out each day." I'm not sure you needed all of that; it might be more subtle and stronger to show her loneliness and misery rather than just have her telling the reader about it.

Anyway, very tightly written, and I enjoyed it. Thank you for writing x

It's good, A nice simple summery of what happened and it seems quite acurate.. nice work