Aww I love it when people mix an oc into existing episodes and you've done it really well throughout the story; she's in the action without taking over so well done :)

Can't wait for another update!

Loving the story!

Great update (-:

Update soon please!

Beth Becker xxxx

I hope you continue with the story as I like to see a Becker and OC stories - perhaps now you could move it on a couple of months from Cutters death with Lorelei now coming to terms more - alittle afraid she will lose someone else (as we all would be) but life has to go on and bills have to be paid - perhaps even mention in passing she attended grief counselloring. Nicely written chapter by the way.

Good chapter, poor old Lorelei hopefully Becker will kiss her better

oh no, lorelei and becker stuck together in a lift? LOL cant wait to see what happens!

update soon :-)

Like the story line hoping to read more so don't get upset and give up sometimes people don't know what to write in a I said I like the story line.

still liking it...

...update soon

:-)

hmmmm...im getting into this, im liking your character lorelei

update again soon :-)