Wonder how Liza is going to react! Great story!

I think you should reread some of the old How I survived Middle School books to understand the characters' personalities because they are extremely OOC in this story. Plus, you also spelled Jenny's and Lisa's name wrong. I think you should at least know how to spell the character's name right before you start writing about it. But name spelling errors weren't the only mistakes-there was several others.
And, I don't see a plot either and everything seems so predictable and cliche.
I think-in my opinion-you should rewrite this story with a better feel of the series and a better story plot.
Sorry.
Keep Calm and Write On,
MKArocks

this is getting good update soon!

when u gonna finish this chapter

Um, you made several mistakes. Jennie is supposed to be Jenny. Liza is in 10th grade. Jenny doesn't have a sister. Addie's last name is Wilson. The characters are pretty OOC.

I found a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes in this story. And Liza's supposed to be in tenth grade because she's older than Jenny. And you spelled Jenny's name wrong. But other than that you should update cause I want to find what happens.