   Crazy Lady 10/3/06 . chapter 12God, I loved this story! I know it's been over four years since you published it on yet I really do want to see more of this story. This was a well written and thought out idea. A new pairing and a good explination about how Chibi-Usa looks and came to be. Absolutly loved it! I really can't get over the fact at how good this story was to me. Please, I know you don't like demands, and I'm not really demanding just begging, but I really wish to see a continuation of this story. I know that you made it that everyone forgot Usagi, but while I was reading the latter chapters I started thinking on how you could work around all that. I know, I know, authors don't like being told ideas or how to write, but I just want you to hear me out. I just have some factors I'd like to point out. So maybe you could get some ideas, work with them, and possible create a continuation to this story. ::wink, wink:: Seriously, though, if not to make a continuation, then for later stories that involve Sailor Moon fanfiction.
Facts:
1. In the very begining, I don't know if people remember this, but Usagi and Mamoru HATED each other. Well, Mamoru teased Usagi, treating her like a child, while Usagi disliked him for him being rude to her. They never once liked each other in any sense then playful rivals. (If playful rivals makes sense..)
2. Mamoru and Usagi ONLY fell in love and started going out because of their returned memories from the moon kingdom. If they never got their memories back, it's obvious they never would have gone out as a couple.
3. If you've ever seen Back to the Future, you would remember the Doc saying somthing to Marty, after his return from 'messing' with his parents past for the first time. Marty's father's old childhood rival found out about the time travel car, went to the past with a gambling/winning book of all lottery numbers. horse winning races, ect. since he was working for Marty's father which he didn't want. Turns out that Marty's father childhood rival changed the present by giving his young self that winning book. The present was drastically changed, and when Marty finally found the Doc of that time stream, Marty asked the Doc about why things were so different for the now current present. The Doc explained that when the old childhood rival went to the past and gave his young self the book, he completly changed the time stream from that point on. Meaning the time stream Marty came from still exsisted, yet was an alternate time stream to the current one they were in presently. Still exsisting yet unable to be reached since Marty was then currently in the time stream the childhood rival created. Which ment Marty had to change things by going in the past yet again. (Did I lose you yet?..)
4. Doesn't Mamoru and all the sailor senshi die for good before crystal tokyo exsist?... (Referring to the Sailor Star series)
Basic point and idea for all this:
My point, and idea; to maybe inspire you to continue with this story; is that yes, Usagi loves Mamoru. Even so, over time, and recarnation, that love can change as well can the destiny of being with that person. Time is never set in stone, no matter how much people like to think that it does; because of that, what if Usagi relised that she doesn't love Mamoru like she used to. What if destiny had changed to where they weren't destinied lovers anymore, because of events that had taken place to change all that. Maybe they were destined lovers in the era of the moon kingdom, yet in this recent life, they aren't. Why? Because they never would have fallen in love if it weren't for remembering their old love during the moon kingdom. Usagi realise that she makes her own destiny, no matter where in time. Only you create your own destiny through your own actions, right? So what if Usagi comes to terms with this and leaves. Going back to the one she truly loves. Crystal Tokyo would still exsist as well as Mamoru and Usagi still being together for all of time (or until they die anyway), yet in an alternate time stream. What if Usagi decided to go back to the one she truly loves now? Even if Crystal Tokyo exsisted by then. I mean, Chibi-Usa needs to know her real father, yes? And memory wipe.. A simple senshi spell. Usagi can easily return their memories since she is more powerful then her senshi by the crystal tokyo era. Oh! Another thought, or idea. A slight alternate fic to were after Usagi goes through with what she did to ensure Chibi Usa; basing off the sailor stars series; everyone dies and she becomes sailor cosmos. Even though everyone dies (for good) Usagi still manages to build Crystal Tokyo, and when she referred to Chibi-Usa never saying anything to her 'father' Mamoru, meaning like speaking to his soul sorta by talking to a grave. The other's don't know because, well, none of them are alive. ::sweat drops:: I'm really rambling aren't I?.. I'm sorry, I'm just trying to inspire you to maybe make a continuation. With all that I rambled on about, you could find loop holes to where you could make a continuation. Or another great story based off all this for this pairing. .;; I'm sorry to ramble on and plead, I just really wish to see you continue with a story idea like this. Please, give it a thought?.. I just really love your work, extreamly love this story, and I really would love to see more!
Ps: I noticed I never mentioned your poem. I'm sorry. I got excited about all the other stuff. ::Sweat drops:: Anyway, I really loved the poem, it fit well for an ending finish to this story. It fit extreamly well in explaining their situation and pain. I really did love it. Do you have any more poems? I'd love to read more, I enjoy writting and reading poetry so I'd love to see more. Sorry, rambling. Great job. Continue with the great work! . |
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