Oh my. First you have created a massive Mary sue. Wandless magic is very rare and only a handful of wizards and witches can do it. Second of all no 11 year old or anyone less then voldemort or a very lucky potter could get inside his mind. Third her name screams Mary sue and she is way too powerful.

Forth, and this is greatly disturbing me, you have paired a teacher with a student, an 11 year old student. This is so sick, no offense, on so many levels. he is her teacher and head of house so his job is to protect her not get romantically involved with her. also he is not a pedo, he'd never do that. I guess when you put OOC that you really ment it.

You are a great writer but I just cant believe you'd think that an 11 year old dating her teacher is ok. Im very very sorry for sounding rude and incredibally mean but I just had to say something.

This was so interesting...are you going to add any more?