Duuuude when are you going to update? Please do not abandon this marvellous story!

It's been so long since an update to this story! I'm so curious about throwing her brother into the current dynamics of Fawn's various relationships with everyone. Pleeeaaaase update soon?

Ok, first of all I found your fic a days ago and it's beautiful. Well writen and well characterized. Your characters, the fact that you decided to go with a new take in the Mansfield Park story but without presenting us with a whole pack of diferents Fannys and Edmunds or Marys it's a great and plesant surprise. On the contrary, your view of the characters it's well put and the development that you do with some of them it's precious. Youre prose and the actions, the mussings of Fanny and her thoughs draw the reader, in this case me, to the actual scene. In a whole, your fic it's very good, and I would like to see more of it. Hope that you surprise us with more. Good luck and my salutes to you.

Is Henry going to pop up in this shopping trip as well? Agh, poor Fawn. At least she'll have her real brother around later though.

Oh it's been so long since there was an update! Please- for some exam study break? A teeny little update?

Loved this chapter so much-I am almost out of words to describe how much I enjoy your amazing writing and story-telling. You're an artist!

All this treating of Flannigan as a child is really bugging me, (and I suspect her aswell). Congrats on writing believable characters.

"...but I think our dress up session shows us that you shouldn't take anything of mine unless you want to drown in it. And besides, I think you should have something that's yours, don't you?" Oh that line! You sure know how to make us want to rip a villain's hair off! If it were me, that would be JUST the encouragement I need to make a move on Ned. Did the Stanford sweater mean what I think it meant? I might actually just be reaching for wild meanings in this chapter. Thank you! It made my day to see the update. And I love Fawn's conflict about leaving and staying, loving and hating in this chapter. It's quite a storm in her head! I'm really excited for the brother chapter!

Heeeeyyyy, we are all patiently waiting for a new chapter. Sooo very patiently :D Lots of love for this story, seriously

I found your story this morning and I could not stop. It was a good morning, discovering this story :D Please keep writing! I'm only on chapter 11 now but I have a feeling it can't possibly be done in chapter 16. This is such a good story- would you possibly update for a new reader?

New post coming soon? Because this story is Brilliant and fantastic. And well... well written and does the character of Fanny Price justice

Aww, thank you for getting back to me! And acknowledging my suggestion :D This chapter was awesome too. A bit creepy (with men around her trying to take charge of her), which is necesary- so it was awesome. Can't wait for the chapters with her brother :D

Go Flannigan! (I hate that they call her Fawn). Best girl kicks guy in nuts scene in a long time.

WOW! I almost freaked out when I saw that you'd updated, as I've been breathlessly awaiting the next chapter to your lovely fic. Of course, I completely understand about busy semesters!
Anyway, loved the chapter-and I've just got to say, I'm forming a guilty affection for Henry Crawford. You've modernized his charm, his tragic suavity from the books so brilliantly!
Of course, Ned is utter perfection as well. I've got such a crush on him!
And Fawn's perspective is so raw and real and believable.
Really, this story is amazing on so many levels! Looking forward to the next chapter!

I've just finished that last chapter and I must say it's brilliant. I'm glad I found this story on Christmas, it really made today much better. Please update soon, I would like to know if the footage they had would be aired on television. And also how Fawn will develop her speaking abilities. I do enjoy her talks with Dr. Grant.