I say good work made more sense than the real story that one is as convoluted as a metal gear story oh a glade to be reading your works again

This is really good! I understand how difficult it is to write a Kingdom Hearts fic, I've attempted it and failed xD But considering that this is excellent!

Excellent oneshot.

Yeah, I kinda hold it against Namine because she & Riku are the once who ruined Roxas & Xion's friendship, just a little grudge I hold against them :/

But Anyway, this was a good oneshot. The writing was Good and I hardly found any spelling errors.

All in all, good job. :)