So, either Snivellous is up to his usual low standard or Voldie has such a good spy network he should have found the kids a year ago.

Why would any one let the Bumbler in the house?

Have they veritaserumed any surviving DEs?

Any one ask why Snivellous is as useless as ever?

Does any one have a working brain cell?

Again, Snivellous talking to his master?

Nobody looking into how the DEs came to be there?

Harry still being an emo cry-baby?

I expected the three of them to learn.

When will someone think to thank Bumbles for the DE visit?

Sounds like a meddlesome manipulative headmaster has decided to play games.

yep time to roast a great turkey

I dont see why they dont tell the great turkey to take a flying leap ...

Great story and well worth reading. It is rather sad the amount of hurt and frustration the teens are subjected to. Thanks for sharing!

i loved this sequel but its so sad that their guardian died! and that they have to leave again. but it was so awsome and epic!

Just out of curiosity...Do you proof read anything you write? You catch so many mistakes by doing this. Also, last I checked a person's name cannot have symbols in them. Throughout this whole chapter, and what I've seen of the beginning of the next you use Professor Villjà for the Professor's name. I have a feeling you copy and pasted her name the whole time and never really noticed that the copied version was wrong...You need to re-read everything you write! I re-read everything I write nearly three times and I always find mistakes. Even after sending it to my beta I still find mistakes that even he missed. You can't, I repeat, You CANNOT, post a chapter without reading it and not expect people to frequently remind you of the many mistakes.

Sorry if many of my reviews seem mean or like flames. they aren't meant as flames, just helpful criticism. Take my words to heart and fix your stories, you'll get many more good reviews than bad ones. I promise.

I have a small problem with the letter. Harry asked Sirius to help him in the second to last chapter of Betrayal after James punched Sirius and left the room. Harry begged Sirius to stop blaming himself and help Harry. (Help him with what I'm still a little confused about...help him with his parents? Come to terms with his new status in the Wizarding World? His depression? what?) then not even a couple hours later, he (yet again with this term) abandons his Godfather. Harry is acting like a three year old who got spanked in the middle of the Toy store. OF COURSE James and Lily are going to surprised about the Snake Language! Everyone is when they find out! But to completely abandon everything because two people were stupid enough to jump to conclusions without knowing the whole story is way too extreme.

It just feels like you needed an excuse for the trio to return to the Muggle world. Hermione could return easily. her parents are muggles and Ron is at odds with his family, but Harry just got his parents back, his godfather is forgiven, and so on...why would he leave when two people who he really knows nothing about hate him? Its like Harry finding out Susan Bones hates his guts and wants him dead so...he leaves the wizarding world? Just doesn't feel believable.

aww i didnt like her but i didnt want her to die i just wanted her to go away ( ehh i dont care thats shes dead that much its better than remus os sirius heck its even better than snape

I LOVE THE i do NOT like the proffesor much too controlling of the if she hasnt noticed Sirius has legal custidy of Harry she cant do anything. And Hermione and Ron could easily become emancipated if thye wished to do so. The Dr. is also very umproffesional hasnt he ver heard of the Patient Doctor confidentiality agreement. Anyway even if I dont like some characters it is still an amzing story. I would have preferred different exchange students however. Maybe Draco Malfoy in stead of Lavender and Parvati

You do realize that you have changed the spelling of the Trio's guardian's name like, three times? -shrugg- it's a great story so far, but I was wondering if you ever describe in more detail what happened to the Trio when the first started going to school in the Muggle World and living with the Professor? Great job so far.

Excellent chapter!

Mayans? I would have thought the Egyptians or the Chaldeans