Oh jesus christ why? I can't read anymore of this. Actually I can't read any more inu/sess fics on this site. And it is not because I dislike the pairing. I love the pairing. But only in hella's poison. And that is because she had a a story with a slow progression towards the romance built up through believable interactions between the brothers. She was forced to use her wonderful imagination for this. She didn't use the excuse of 'mates or demon blood or whatever the fuck kind of forceful bonding' to push them together, to make an excuse just to write the slash. Where is the enjoyment of that? There is no developement of their characters in almost all these poor excuses for fanfiction. Seriosly. How is it that every writer, every single one, in this pairing is so horribly bad at it? Or those fics where they actually secretly desire eachother? Boring! Unbelievable! And it cuts out the best part that any good writer would know. The chase! Almost all of hellas fic was the chase, in this case the slow believable bonding where inuyasha and sess get through their past issues and come to realize they like eachother as people and eventually realize they have more feelings. Also hella kept them in character. More then anybody ever has on this site. All the rape in these fics? Hell no. Not buying it. Sesshoumaru's high, noble character is not enjoyably imagined in my mind stooping to something I'm certain he would see as far beneath him. Not to say he isn't cruel. But it is a different sort of cruel. Power hungry cruel maybe. Not rape cruel. For the love of god they don't need to knock eachother up in every single fic. The children of the writers imagination is often not what readers want to read about. If you worried about the last of the friggen white dog demons dying out...well...don't be. Its not an issue in ppls minds when they eant to read a good romance or whatever knid of story. Its pretty irrelevant. I never thought about it while reading poison that's for sure. Please learn how to keep them in character. Develope your characters in a believable way. Give the reader suspense. Build up the romance. And for god's sake quite usong the mate/alpha/beta excuse to skip over building the characters up to make them ready for romance. For the crap stories we get that comes with the slash in this fandom we may as well read a pwp

Boring

I can haz more chapter please?

This story is very interesting. I'll be waiting for ore chapters. -

AWESOME STORY! Please continue!

I want to know what happens to Miroku! _

HAHA that was freakin awsome. I look forward to reading more of this story. Update soon plz.

I did enjoy it! Along with the rest of the story. Even if you got cold feet, I think it was perfect! You pulled the readers in. Keep the updates going, please. )

well, id say youve done extremely well, especially for your 'first time' ;-) that miroku is shocked was to be expected, but his reason knocked me for six - does he really think inu would ever want this abusive bi#ch?

IT WAS AWESOME! continue! and PLEASE let inuyasha remember this! ;)

ohhhhhhh sesshomaru got him shakin in his boots. yay

I think you did just fine :D I feel like Sesshomaru would be even more dominant than he was in that situation but It is your story and you can portray the characters how ever you like :D Keep up the good work!

For someone who says that your to shy for yaoi you write very very good lemons!

this is a good smutty chapter, i like it, especially when sesshy gave inu a blow job. please make more chapters, AND QUICK!

this going to be interstng on how miroku tells the girls what going on it going to be major intertainment. this chapter is very good update soon good scene you have me on edge update soon as possible

lololol I like how Sesshoumaru grew impatient and disappointed with Inuyasha not remembering their little tryst in the woods the first time that he triggered the demon again hehe! Devilish youkai! And now Miroku knows? Hmmm, this is getting interesting fast! Great job! I look forward to more!

-DM