 Epigone1 4/11/02 . chapter 1Oh, man. Pure brilliance. The first two sentences of "The Favor" were *gorgeous* - so poetic, so fitting. All of the language is that way, come to think of it, and I like all three pieces equally. The lyric references in the last piece really interested me; they were so skillfully executed, because they actually added to the narration instead of sounding forced or trite or unoriginal, as they so often do when included in fics. This, though - this was wonderful. |