nice work! just out of curiosity are Screech and Thud going to get girlfriends?

father scares me anyone else agree

really jinzo is jafar and what the heck is father from kids next door doing in the story

hold on are you telling me that screech and thud are friends with aladdin and chomper in this story i like it much better than them being the bad guys with red claw he gives me the creeps no offence

For some reason this reminds Fred of the disney movie Aladdin even though Disney hasn't been invented yet .

I will watch this movie at the drive in over a Brontosaurus Rib *Gets in car and runs...err drives to the burger stand seen in the end credits and then goes to the drive in movies with Dino popping his head out of the back.

The giant TV shows the words: Featured Presentation: and the title: Land Before Time XVII: Aladdin.

$ Flintstones Meet The Flinstones...they're a modern stone age family!$

I really like what you've written. I love the subplot in the backround of the main story where Chomper himself tells the story and how Cera tries to "teach him a lesson" and how it's ongoing. that is really something she would do, she doesn't trust him anyway.

Some positive feedback...

-I really enjoyed the split song

-Consistent plotline

-Great Vocabulary

Some negative...

-A little more descriptive in the areas

-The fight scene was a little hard to follow.

That was romancing music with Aladdin, Chomper and Jasmine and Rita. Jinzo and cronies seriously despose Aladdin and Chomper into the sea until they rescued by Genie. Chomper smashed the snake scepter when he finds out that the sultan was hypnotized, and the sultan orders the guards arrest Jinzo and his cronies but he escapes. Please update when you have spare time and sometime you must stop Chomper and Cera from wrecking the entire world. The update is 08-18-11.

PS: I am going to collage next year.

From your Land Before Time Crossover fan

Sean Michael George Chow

Hey good buddy, sorry for taking so long, I was busy, i just had my wisodm teeth pulled, so I had some to catch up in school sorry about, I like the story so far, can't wait for the next chapter, I'm am also working on the second chapter for Home Alone 4, see you later. and PS i have other chapters for others that I have subnected so check them out.

Still as awesome as ever. You never fail to come up with great ideas man.

Screech and Thud afraid of heights? THAT'S a new one! LOL

How can anyone hold a skyscraper-high Godzilla in a net? You know how to make good crossovers, dude, but this is just ridiculous!

Roy, huh? Nice name.

this is gnarly man very gnarly stories going great man hope you update asap

Hey judgment good buddy, It's sorry of me not responding to you, my computer is broke again but this time, the password is not working, but I got my netbook for school, I will write some later, and also in the next chapter, have me come knocking on the door, you see that I'm out of the hospital, when I look around and see the mess and I will say, " Holy damn, what the hell happened in here?" and you and everybody, even Littlefoot and the others explane what happened, I see Cera and Chomper running around then I put some soap on the floor and ended the chase for good, please write back soon, see you tomorrow good buddy.

dude your crazy that's all i got to say i am trying to keep from laughing

Oi, WTF123 said for more story updates and so do mine. Please update more story if have the spare time, I like how the sultan meets the flying pokemon Gliscor from Pokemon series and Sierra crashes to the pillar when chasing by the sultan when riding on Gliscor. I also like how Chomper met Toothless from How to Train Your Dragon movie.