I LOVE IT :D you should do some more just like this style.

You really nailed Magnus's personality! I can exactly picture him speaking like that in the books. Well done :)

I liked it ,but I hope the next chapter isn't just dialouge.

This story has potential and just using dialouge is kind of distracting from the actual content.

I saw that you were going to test out some different writing styles though, so I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I absolutely loved this! It's just so cute!

I'm excited to see what other drabbles you come up with.

And, the last line made me laugh. :D This really reminded me of me and my boyfriend with the whole bothering each other part. Haha.

I can't wait for the next update!