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| Reviews for The Merman |
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  Guest 5/15/13 . chapter 1 Fun, although very OOC |
 lurker123 5/2/13 . chapter 1This was fun, in a creepy cougar way that I usually don't like. But I liked this, despite the discomfort. Just saying. You should continue it. I think there's definitely more to this story. :-) |
| cbzoo 4/29/13 . chapter 1 great little story |
| thaliagrace16 4/23/13 . chapter 1 what a fantastic little story! i really really liked it - cute ending and i think it really suited the story; i don't really feel like it needs additional chapters, though i would not mind if you wrote more! |
| WonderWoman1993 4/15/13 . chapter 1 Great story! |
| EdwardsLilLamb 4/11/13 . chapter 1 I love your story, I'd also love to see part 2 of this story. Hint hint! |
| maxandmo 3/23/13 . chapter 1 LOVED IT! |
| Indigold10 2/23/13 . chapter 1 Loved it! Super cute :) Very interesting plot line and EB interaction. Great writing! |
| twilightlover4evr 1/31/13 . chapter 1 I liked it :D Very nicely done, you could turn this into something more if you wanted |
| Gaymar21 1/27/13 . chapter 1 Wonderful |
| FrustratedLawStudent 1/25/13 . chapter 1 Great and lovely and sweet and so on, and so forth ;) I would really, really love to read more about those two... |
| featherme 1/24/13 . chapter 1 Loved this! I could visualize every detail. Thank you! |
| tirzofjoylovesbooks 1/14/13 . chapter 1 I would have liked a more closed ending this left me feeling like "that was it?" But I loved regardless. |
| zkcej 1/9/13 . chapter 1 Lovely i want more! Lolz Thanks for the cuteness xx |
| Halo221 1/5/13 . chapter 1 Hot hot hot! |
