|Reviews for The Merman|
| Guest 5/15/13 . chapter 1
Fun, although very OOC
| lurker123 5/2/13 . chapter 1
This was fun, in a creepy cougar way that I usually don't like. But I liked this, despite the discomfort. Just saying. You should continue it. I think there's definitely more to this story. :-)
| cbzoo 4/29/13 . chapter 1
great little story
| thaliagrace16 4/23/13 . chapter 1
what a fantastic little story! i really really liked it - cute ending and i think it really suited the story; i don't really feel like it needs additional chapters, though i would not mind if you wrote more!
| WonderWoman1993 4/15/13 . chapter 1
| EdwardsLilLamb 4/11/13 . chapter 1
I love your story, I'd also love to see part 2 of this story. Hint hint!
| maxandmo 3/23/13 . chapter 1
| Indigold10 2/23/13 . chapter 1
Loved it! Super cute :) Very interesting plot line and EB interaction. Great writing!
| twilightlover4evr 1/31/13 . chapter 1
I liked it :D Very nicely done, you could turn this into something more if you wanted
| Gaymar21 1/27/13 . chapter 1
| FrustratedLawStudent 1/25/13 . chapter 1
Great and lovely and sweet and so on, and so forth ;) I would really, really love to read more about those two...
| featherme 1/24/13 . chapter 1
Loved this! I could visualize every detail. Thank you!
| tirzofjoylovesbooks 1/14/13 . chapter 1
I would have liked a more closed ending this left me feeling like "that was it?" But I loved regardless.
| zkcej 1/9/13 . chapter 1
Lovely i want more! Lolz
Thanks for the cuteness
| Halo221 1/5/13 . chapter 1
Hot hot hot!