|Reviews for The Merman|
| Lurecyka 7/11/11 . chapter 1
Wow ! This o/s was freaking good ! I just felt the sexual tension in there and your writing is a real pleasure to read! Thanks for this :)
| SabLuvsLogan 7/11/11 . chapter 1
| xrxdanixrx 7/11/11 . chapter 1
Loved it so much! You should definitely do some sort of continuation. Either way, I very much enjoyed it. Thanks for writing this!
| Azlady2003 7/11/11 . chapter 1
this would be a good story to continue but either way you did end it on a good note. Loved it.
| Sunfeathers 7/11/11 . chapter 1
This was such a fun story! I am so glad they met up again when he was a little older - and that their feelings went beyond just that one sexy summer. Edward was so sweet and sincere when he explained how she had "ruined" him for other women. I'm so glad she did! I would love to see where they go from here ... would you ever consider a future shot or even continuing the story?
Off to check your profile for other stories! :D
| mssammydean 7/11/11 . chapter 1
Loved it! Where can I get me a Merman? ;)
| fancifulgirl 7/10/11 . chapter 1
this was so good. i love cougar/instructor bella. it would be great to see a little more of how they reconnect now that they both know what they're missing!
| Arabella's 7/10/11 . chapter 1
So stinkin' cute. I can't take it :)
| DreamAsYouLiveForever 7/10/11 . chapter 1
Lovely story, yet again!
| GeezerWench 7/10/11 . chapter 1
That was fun!
| Eaglerise 7/10/11 . chapter 1
Aw. This was a great little story! Loved the sexual tension around the pool! I know this was a one shot but you could really explore the college scene from here!
| RPatzonly 7/10/11 . chapter 1
Loved it! We're stuck with a girl lifeguard at our pool:(. Totally sucks!
| gsbella 7/10/11 . chapter 1
so good, so sweet, so sexy - please say you'll write a full length fic again...have missed your wonderful characters and writing.
thanks for sharing your imagination
| Sus - AKA Cullendriver 7/10/11 . chapter 1
Cute story! I like Bella as the sex-teaching cougar!
| withloveiread 7/10/11 . chapter 1
hahaha looved it :D