| Reviews for The Merman |
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Hazelnut4o6 11/5/11 . chapter 1This was fabulous. I usually despise one shots for the simple fact that they fail to have a plot or leave you hanging... while this did in the end, I absolutely adored this. I think because it was rather long... maybe? I don't know, but I loved it! Thought you deserved a review for your greatness ) |
frazier17 11/5/11 . chapter 1I really loved this! FYI, I put it on story alert...wishful thinking:) |
bulletproof 11/5/11 . chapter 1Oh this made my heart race and flutter and soar - thank you. |
biblepam 11/5/11 . chapter 1saw your story as a rec from "the fictionators" site.. i really enjoyed it.. it's been a long time since i've read a tale from you.. 'Creature of Habit' was one of the first stories i read after finding FF.. it also was one of my favs.. thanks for sharing your story.. it was a hottie.. Pam B. |
annaharding 11/5/11 . chapter 1I really, really liked this story! So glad he grew up and came back. Sneaky Alice! Thanx for this reading fun! |
shaz308 11/5/11 . chapter 1Found this on the fictionators blog, nice story. Look forward to reading more of your work, thanks. |
Breaking Aurora 11/5/11 . chapter 1That was great! Ahhhh, I'm missing summer already. The story was sweet, I guess kinda sorta realistic (letting him go, getting back together after some maturing), wonderfully awkward and real for a teenage boy, and hawt too! :-) I wasn't sure how you were going to wrap it up but I loved it. Thanks for the "summer loving"...lol...oh no, Grease is stuck in my head now! Oh, BTW, I found out about your story on The Fictionators...love those guys, they make the best recs :-) |
cullenbabe 11/5/11 . chapter 1awesome fic :) funny. an easy, quick read (coz sometimes i just dont have the time nor the patience to read multi-chaptered stories). 10 stars for entetainment value ;) . ". . I think God gave me boobs to like, feed babies and stuff. ." lmao |
kismit1496 11/4/11 . chapter 1you know this could be a great three or four part series - just sayin! |
IccaSpriggs 11/4/11 . chapter 1This was so wonderful. Sweet and sexy and with all the good stuff that a good relationship needs. I'm so happy that they decided to try again. I'm sure it will end wonderfully for them both. Thanks for sharing. |
FFpassion 11/4/11 . chapter 1This was a great read, thank you for writing. I loved it :) Irene xx |
LadyTx 11/4/11 . chapter 1Great story... Thanks for sharing! |
beachblonde2244 10/20/11 . chapter 1Love love love this, like blushed and squealed adorable. I can't tell you how much I enjoyed it :) you're fantastic. Another oneshot to be added to my favorite's list! |
MarLea Pie 10/18/11 . chapter 1Alright - when I first saw the title, I thought Zoolander...then I kept reading and I thought - SO FRIGGING HOT! I don't remember 18 yr olds looking hot back when I was an 18 yr old. Go Bella for being a great teacher! Loved it ;) mlp |
Twink423 10/6/11 . chapter 1Freaking awesome and hilarious. Loved all the spying Bella did of her boy before snagging him. And now they can explore a more grown up fun. ;-) |