|Reviews for The Merman|
| adt216 10/4/11 . chapter 1
| cdd12 10/3/11 . chapter 1
Saw this rec'd on ADF and really enjoyed it!
| ttharman 9/27/11 . chapter 1
WHY did I wait so long to read this? *smacks myself ion the head* This was awesome...OMG so awesome...
I love how she feel for him just watching him, teaching him and she was so worried that he fell for her. And her breaking her heart and instead it was almost like he did without knowing but he was there for her all over again...This was amazing!
| mcgt 9/26/11 . chapter 1
That was such a cute story. Loved it. I'm planning on rec'ing it on the Twific Reviews site today for our Cullen Lovin' feature as one last ode to summer.
Here's the link in case you're interested: twificreviewsa-z. blogspot
| b3j02 9/11/11 . chapter 1
That was fantastic too! Can you do no wrong? UGH! I would like to formally ask for a second chapter of this one too! It's a winner in my book! Thanks for sharing! Love your writing!
| FinnMac 9/9/11 . chapter 1
Fun. Sexy. Hawt. Wish I had a Merboy to turn into a Merman way back in the day!
| WardLover TwiFan 9/8/11 . chapter 1
If you're interested to know how I got to your little o/s, I clicked over from the feature on P.I.C. FanFic. I'm not sure how recent the feature was (2 days ago or two weeks ago?). I've been trying to avoid the sites that rec fics cause my TBR list is so long, but I was bored and surfing around the sites and now here I am. As soon as I finished reading I went to your profile page to see if maybe you had extended the fic onto a regular story. That's how much I liked it. Now I see another o/s of yours I'd like to read, but I'm okay with leaving this fic as is. I'll tell you why I REALLY like about this one. Two years ago there was a lifeguard where we had our summer pool membership. He was a grad student home for the summer and he was rockin' a HOT body, great smile, more hair than I would like (on his head you perv!), and helped coach the swim team and give swim lessons. So I was one of those almost 40 moms that watched him from behind my sunglasses while my kids swam. Call me a creep, a cougar, whatever you wish. It was harmless, but I could pretty much relate to Bella here. ;-)
| loca37 9/4/11 . chapter 1
Loved this! I do wish you'd write more often.
You are so very good at it.
| k.lutz17 9/3/11 . chapter 1
fluff! 3 too cute
| Twilight44 9/2/11 . chapter 1
Very hot sexy and sweet. Cant believe she let him go for 2 yrs though!
| joce28r 9/1/11 . chapter 1
| addiesmum 8/30/11 . chapter 1
Loved this one-shot! Very sexy and fun.
| Summer Dawn 8/30/11 . chapter 1
Very good! Wished it went longer and could see where they end up. However, I have an imagination and can make them do what I want! ;)
| wonderfullybedazzled 8/29/11 . chapter 1
Mr. Boost recced. I love swimmers! So hot! Please tell me you will make this a multi chap fic!
| secretobsession7 8/29/11 . chapter 1
That was such a wonderful story, I wish there was more!