|Reviews for A Game of Risk|
| Emil Lime 10/10/11 . chapter 5
I was totally thinking about you yesterday! That's just freaky! I was checking my email and was like, I haven't heard from her in forever...I wonder if she's ever going to send me the next chapter. I even considered emailing you but I didn't. Either way, I'm glad to hear you've been working on the story even though you haven't been typing it up. Go ahead and take your time with getting things ready to go. I will be here to edit it as well as review it when you get it posted!
Keep working on it and I know how rough the first year of college is so keep going!
| ShadowsAlwaysWin1 9/28/11 . chapter 4
You're writing is incredibly better than the teenage mobster!
I'm loving this story! It's more realistic then the last one!
You actually portray Luck pretty good 0.o
Please continent writing :)
| Emil Lime 8/18/11 . chapter 4
Yo! Sorry it's taken so long to review! I've been busy with starting up college again! I'm sorry you had a mini breakdown recently. Finding out what to do with your life is a pain, especially when you're going into a new environment where you won't hardly know people. I've managed to cope so I know you'll make it just fine! And I'm glad you said you're feeling better (especially since that leads to a new chapter!). Anyway, comments about the chapter! Great chapter! I really like how she managed to stumble upon a job just because she wanted a greek salad. Go Masha! I also like how you have it set up right outside of the Alveare. That's a good tie in for later, I assume. The Luck and Masha scene (even though short) was very cute. You make them seem so casual that it doesn't come off as awkward OC character meets sexy actual character, which I'm really thankful for. A lot of people have problems making a relationship seem natural so this fic makes me infinitely happy. I'm very interested to see what Konstantine is up too...no doubt it's something interesting...and the Gandor's know about it so I guess we'll see where that goes (BERGA, LUCK, COME ON! DON'T LET KONSTATINE DO AS HE PLEASES! XP but I suppose if you didn't then there'd be no story xp) Either way, great chapter and I hope you update soon!
ps: don't worry about not having a job. I am just getting one and I'm a little older than you are (if my info from what you've told me is correct) I always say "studies come first" and then money does xpxpxp
pps: YOUR FIC IS AWESOME EVEN THOUGH PEEPS AREN'T REVIEWING ON IT! THEY JUST A BUNCH OF FAIL WHALES! XP
| CastielAngelofThursday 8/16/11 . chapter 4
Good as ever Can't wait for the next one!
| CastielAngelofThursday 8/14/11 . chapter 3
| zenbon zakura 7/19/11 . chapter 3
what can i say
| Emil Lime 7/12/11 . chapter 3
Another chapter posted! XD Like I promised, I shall tell you why this chapter was most epic! I like how it jumped between perspectives (kind of like a Baccano! episode) and I like that it wasn't just between Konstantine and Masha but also the clerk guy! (Go clerk guy! XD). I also like how Konstantine's character was introduced (more so) in this chapter. He comes off as a nice guy but something is definitely up with him. I did enjoy the little bit with Luck and Masha at the end, too. I agree with your previous statement, Masha was to frustrated and angry before and although I did like her then, I like her more now. She's more realistic or something. Either way, I also enjoyed the whole "rice pudding" thing. I've actually never had rice pudding so I can't say I know why she likes it but either way, I like that she likes a food that isn't chocolate or something extremely sweet (which a lot of OC female charcters do and it gets old xp). So thank you for making Masha original! Either way, I do wonder what Konstantine is going to do now that he knows Masha was the girl he was looking for (nice screw up, Kon). Anyway, UPDATE SOON!
| Emil Lime 7/7/11 . chapter 2
I really liked this chapter! I do like where your story is headed because It feels a lot more active and alive than the previous one (don't get me wrong, the previous one was good too). The story seems like it's going somewhere quite a bit faster, though :D. I have to say that Uncle Peter is very cool (maybe that's just me) and the way you introduced her to Luck was very, very, very, very creative! I think this meeting was a lot more subtle and it gives Masha a new friend as well, even though she's not really aware of the whole 'mafia' thing yet. I look forward to the rest of the story!
ps: I also loved the twins and the every mysterious mother. I couldn't stop laughing when I read the whole 'cathing the apartment on fire' thing. Nothing like a good threat to get the bills paid, ja?
| Emil Lime 7/7/11 . chapter 1
Whoop! I'm so happy that you're finally back! I've been dying to know what's going to happen and now that you've got your story rolling, I shall figure out!